It relaunched under Gamepot as a free title, - would avoid "title" as synonym for game here since we're also discussing the title of the game.this sentence mentions twice that it was called The Ring of Dominion Originally developed by Puraguru (Vanillaware) and Multiterm under the title Fantasy Earth: The Ring of Dominion, it released under that title by Square Enix as a paid product through its PlayOnline service.Is the genre not "Massive ly multiplayer online."? Same goes for lead and the article body.Normally we cover major English-speaking regions + the developer/publisher's region if different - are any of the companies involved here from China, or is there some other reason we mention the Chinese release in the infobox?.Would suggest at least mentioning them briefly in the development section with a source. Fujimoto and Yamaguchi are not mentioned in the article proper, and is not backed up by a source anywhere.Same goes for when this is written in the lead. I know you go into this later in the article, but Puraguru (Vanillaware) is not super clear - I would suggest something like "Puraguru (now known as Vanillaware)".The image caption is a sentence fragment, so it should not have a period at the end.I'll review this one - I'll be back with comments within a couple of days.- Alexandra IDV 09:40, 29 August 2021 (UTC) Reply The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Fantasy Earth Zero/GA1. No further edits should be made to this discussion. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page.
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